2021英语课标全国江西高三摸底短文改错书面表达

2021英语课标全国江西高三摸底短文改错书面表达
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”. In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.

语法易错题
 英语单词快速记忆
 初中英语试题

答案
I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to ①opens/open a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it ②required/requires a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ③ordinarily/ordinary cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe ④∧to have a special theme such as ⑤
like
“Tang Dynasty”. In the cafe,customers will enjoy ⑥yourselves/themselves in the historical environment ⑦what/(that"/" which) is created for them. If I succeed in ⑧manage/managing one, I will open more.I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different ⑨city/cities. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and ⑩an/a unique style.
①考查非谓语动词。句意:现在我的梦想是开一家咖啡馆。不定式符号后用动词原形,故改成open。
②考查时态。此处强调的是一个客观事实,故用一般现在时态。
③考查形容词。句中cafe是名词,需要用形容词来修饰。
④考查非谓语动词。句意:我想要我的咖啡馆有一个特殊的主题,例如“唐朝”。want sb./sth. to do sth.想要某人或某物做某事。
⑤考查固定短语。such as 例如。
⑥考查反身代词。此处指代的是customers,故用themselves。
⑦考查定语从句。先行词是environment,将先行词代入从句中,作主语,指物,故用that或which。
⑧考查非谓语动词。介词in后面应该用动名词形式,故改成 managing。
⑨考查名词复数。city为可数名词,many后应该用名词复数形式。
⑩考查冠词。 unique以辅音音素开头,故用a。

书面表达
你校英文报正在征稿。请以“A Fantastic Trip”为题,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.旅行介绍;
2.旅行感受。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.短文题目已为你写好。
A Fantastic Trip

答案
A Fantastic Trip
This summer I took a snorkelling trip to the undersea world, which turned out to be extremely fantastic.
The first thing I became aware of was all the vivid colors surrounding me—purples, reds, oranges, yellows and blues. Seeing such extraordinary beauty, I found my heart beating wildly and every cell in my body waking up. I began to explore the fantastic corals where all kinds of neat and elegant fish were swimming. Suddenly, I caught sight of an eel with its head showing how from a hole to watch for tasty food. I felt scared to death and fled away.
Exposed in such deep clear water, I found my trip awesome!